Feedback Wanted | First GFX

Hello again developers! I recently got Photoshop and the first thing I wanted to make was a

GFX

I am looking for tips and feedback that could possibly help me improve.

(yes i know the render cut off part of the hands but ill do better next time)

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Looks good! Could I hire you for GFX on my group?

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Of course! Add me on discord; ! nickk#9429

It looks great! especially for your first gfx.

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Thank you so much! Glad you like it.

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Wow! I don’t have any feedback really, everything looks good!
Grade: 93/100

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Amazing for the 1st time, I would suggest making render a bit bigger and maybe add more effects to text such as outer glow, inner glow and similar. Good job! :slight_smile:

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Okay! Thank you for the tips, I will try them on my next GFX! :slightly_smiling_face:

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the legs are weird the character gets cut off on the left side that blobs at the corners do not look good the lighting doesn’t match up and the watermark or whatever that is is covering to much of the character and your lighting is kind of… idk weird? you need more glow and stuff for things like this

grade: 55/100

the “watermark” is the group name, most gfx for role-play groups are like that. it displays their name so people know who it belongs to

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definitely should be more lower down then, like around the legs, keep the middle empty if you have an image with detail in it! top bottom and sides i think maybe you can put stuff like text and stuf

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okay. ill try that, thank you.

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Looks good! I’d even say this is too good to be your first GFX. The colors look really good aswell.

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Truly amazing for your first GFX!!

You have extreme potential in this category, so keep it up!

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I’m astonished that this is your first gfx! I don’t think first gfxs are this great, really! Keep up the amazing work!

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Apart from from the render window issue you are describing, I am also detecting some clipping issues between the head and the torso, as well as the arms being detatched and them put slightly lower than the torso, which looks a bit weird. What is that white shading in the hair??

You should also think about the colors you use for your text. The text is clearly one of the more important aspects of this image, and should definetly be colored brighter and more visibly than the background. This slightly darker shade of yellow is not as attractive.

The position of your text is also important. Either place it near the bottom, at the exact middle or according the Golden cut. Not at this random, kinda in the middle but not, location you have it on right now. It makes it less visually appealing.

Overall, there is definitely room for improvement, this is not that advanced of a GFX, but still acceptable, if you don’t seek perfection.

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Thank you for all the feedback. I will definitely be trying to do as you said on my next one. :smile: