Feedback wanted on GFX Commission

About

Hello! I am a GFX artist and I want some feedback on some recent GFX I made for @CapnFry. I used Cinema 4D and Photoshop. They both took about 2-3 hours total.

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This is the game link: Bacon Burger [ALPHA] - Roblox

If you wish to hire me you can click here to view my portfolio.
Thx for reading! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Looks decent, but the pan doesn’t look right. Or is it a plate?
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The sudden change between textured and flat color doesn’t look that good.
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Lastly the trees are clipping through the fence.

Very cool render! I recommend using cycles to render if your using evee by the way!

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Wow, the GFX honestly looks amazing, nothing much to say about it, very neat and organized.

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Thanks for the feedback! I didnt make the map but I should have caught it.

Since the burgers kind of look ‘oval’ shaped, I would try replacing the ‘o’ with a burger, to make the logo stand out more.

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This looks very cool and creative! :woot:

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