Feedback/A little advice on aesthetic gfx

Hello, I am just a gfx guy who works for a studio and does a bit of freelance but I decided that I would go back to basics instead of doing scenic I would do the most simple of all renders!
AESTHETIC RENDERS
Simple all you really have to do with these are A simple render of an avatar modelling or something.
And place a background with a certain colour tinge but glows.
I made this for a customer after they wanted to pay low but ofc they did the annoying thing of finding a gfx artist and looking for others so she never paid me so you guys get the full version

gfx had to show the watermarked version cos the file size is too big I think

I don’t think you uploaded the picture correctly.

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The lighting could be fixed, also did you use a rig

I watermarked it the lighting is fine on it and ye why?

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The lighting is WAY too dark. Like what TD_Playz said, it could be fixed.

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No I watermarked it and toned down the lighting so I could post here its just a black bucketed screen

There’s no need to put a black screen over the entire GFX when you’re watermarking… the red text is enough. And your lighting STILL can be fixed as it looks one dimensional. I don’t really see a variety of shades… Here’s one of my renders for comparison:
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not really my taste, but you can do better next time :heart: by using blender + photoshop

First off, I really like the creativity in this GFX! The background really catches my eye, and the pose was creative and unique. I feel like the lighting could be improved a bit. If you use Blender, you could create a light source to fix this issue. Also, I suggest you exaggerate the pose a little more and play around with camera angles to give your GFX a more dynamic feeling. I hope you take this advice in consideration. Practice makes perfect!

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Of course I will after the 6 people saying the lighting is off I will make sure to actually use 3 point lighting

The watermark would drown it out less with just the text

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I mean, I can’t see any lighting but I’m not sure if the watermark has a black screen with a small % of opacity. I think you should also try coming out the comfort zone of the stereotypical ‘wave at the camera and hands on hip’ pose.

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Yea your right the person who wanted it wanted their avatar and honest to god I always avoid her type of avatar