I made this, but I don’t know what or where I could put/use it and what could I put around it?
Some tips:
- Make the white parts of the window/shine less transparent.
- Having some more variety to the build makes it shine more. What I mean is like a different shape than a cube.
- The font doesn’t really suit the build in my opinion. Also rather than putting the text on the wall use a sign board.
I hope it helps.
You could use it in several low poly scenes.
Adding a pathway in front with some trees at both of the sides would be nice too.
Ok Ok, Thank you, ill definitely take some ideas from your post
Thank you.
This build actually has plenty of potential with the low poly theme that you’re going for, I would change the brick material to a smooth plastic and a whitish/bluish color. Specifically I would say for suggestions I would:
- Work with ROBLOXs lighting properties (Sunrays, ColorCorrection, ShadowMap)
- Look up reference pictures on Google to kind of get a feel of what you’re making
- Change the font to something more cartoony
Happy Building!
stickza
Mhm, Ill take some ideas from here too Maby the all low poly and font so
Thank you.
Put some plant boxes and a bit of green some bushes around so it will look inviting to customers if its like a store.
Thx, good idea. Will be using it.
You could try adding a bit more details on the building:
- Try adding bushes or plants
- If you’re thinking of adding details inside of the building, add them (try to make them detail also)
Hope this helps!
So here’s what I think you could improve on
- Work on the lighting in the build
- Make the text smaller
- Change the brick texture to smooth plastic and add your own bricks made out of parts
Other than that, it looks great! Keep up the awesome work!
You could always change:
- Material for cube
- Make the size a bit larger to add more room for extra low poly details
- Add something extra like; AC Vents, etc
- Change up the colors to blend wtih eachother
At the start, I think it looks pretty good, however there are just a few things you could try improving on your build to make it more interesting - appealing.
The first thing I’ll improve is the “materials” instead of just adding material you should throw some colors so it’ll match the theme your trying to accomplish changing the roof color to something like grey-ish could possibly improve that I don’t really think that fits well with your build.
You should try adding or placing different shapes depending on what will this be used for, consider not making everything one color change it up a bit so ti doesn’t feature similar objects if you know what i mean. Maybe place box plants underneath the window adding some hanging plants, signs, trash can, ect.
However, I can still this would look good if this was placed in a street acting like a small shop featuring other building. Overall it’s a good build.
Okay Thx, ill keep that in mind.
It’s cute; the stripes on the windows are a nice trick to simulate reflection. As others have said, maybe make them more transparent, and, I’d look at the bottom of the building and add something to break up the brick. The font is good, I’d lighten the neon effect a little though!
I don’t think the box should have the brick texture since it does not fit with windows/doors.
Hmm, This looks good I really like the glass texture. I highly suggest you add maybe low poly small bushes in the window or you could have some bushes around the whole building. Maybe have a pipe of some type of pipe hanging on the right side of the building. Maybe also on the side try adding a spray paint word or something.