Feedbacks about my droppers and upgrader

Hi, I’m new to this forum thing so I’ll try my best to keep it simple.

Hello, my name is TheMurdererKO and I’m 13 years old. I’ve always wanted to be a builder in Roblox so I must always practice and learn from someone else.
Can you guys give me some feedbacks or any improvement about my builds? Well, after all, I’m just 13.
I’m building droppers right now because I want to start my building skills with some basics.
Screenshots:

Blue Dropper:

Red Dropper:

Yellow Upgrader:


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I like them, the style of build is simple but looks sophisticated, and your colour matching and choices are spot on.

One thing you could possibly do to improve this, is as a sort of flowing animation or particle to the tanks, especially the ones with the pipes running into them, like the red neon.

I think that would help place them in a scene.

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Thank for the feedback! Even though I don’t really know how to do particles but I can test it.

The colours seem a bit too distinct, be it the bright quality of your yellow or the more mellow green or red buttons. I’d concentrate on creating a useful palette of colours so that everything synchronises nicely, while still adhering to the robotic theme . The fact Roblox has RGB colours helps. :slight_smile:

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Thanks! Really helpful. I’m like a kid when choosing colours.:smile::smile:

It’s good, but can everything be perfect when there’s at least a teeny tiny problem?

Nothing is perfect so I’ll try my best to build the best quality. And btw, what do you mean by that? Is there a problem with my builds? I really need a feedback so I can improve my builds.

No, it’s just a fact “Every build is not perfect every time.”

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Looks high quality, I’m not a builder, but your buildings look like they would be used in a front page game

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Thanks! Your feedback was really blown my mind! :sweat_smile: :sweat_smile:

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Looks really good i like the style of the build looks high quality, like Wing said you should add a flowing animation to the. Ugrader tank you can make particles by pressing the effects, and pressing ParticleEmitter.

If you are at least 13, you can be here and matter the same like everyone! Age doesn’t matter and that why this forum is something else than other! :smiley:
Your dropper and upgrader are amazing and really looks like it would be on front page game. The thing I miss here is ParticleEmitter or Sparkles and Animation. Keep building and you will be great at it!

I’m 13! I’ll add some particles soon.

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll improve my build next time!

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Wow, I was surprised by your work!
Continue straight so! although in have started a little younger than you with 12 years old and experienced people always gave me expiration! I loved your work!

I really love this build, looks great! keep up the good work!