Feedbacks on my game?

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#1

Hi!
Been working on this game for 3 months and I’m so happy I’d finish this properly, being one of the first ever games I’d ever publish and finish without giving up on it.

The map needs good work and yeah, I’m working on it! I just needed an easy and small map to test the game out; tell me what you think! If it could improve and if it’s worth to keep working on it!

Any suggestion or feedback is highly appreciated.

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#2
POINTS ADDED:

POINTS ADDED:
Door opening to restaurant is cool. (needs a little fixing on timing can walk through when closed and such idk how to explain it)
I like snowman assistant. He highlighted a table for me :slight_smile:
I like the snowmen delivering food to you.
I like the table designs (not really a fan of the planked texture as the table top other than that I like)

POINTS TAKEN OFF:

POINTS TAKEN OFF:
AI game art
Default loading screen
Prompted to add friends on join
Lack of detail on outside of building
Lack of detail on terrain (trees and ground for example)
Lack of detail in building.
Above lighting spam/too much of in a pattern/grid? (idk just looks weird)
Maybe add a slight dark background to the assistant talk UI?

OVERALL THOUGHTS:

OVERALL THOUGHTS:
I get that this is in alpha and the main thing in alpha stages is to get the mechanics of the game working (not focus on beauty so, don’t really take the lack of detail to heart).

This game has potential to be a great hang out place to eat with people and have convos.

One thing I don’t like is that there is no penalty for ordering food. You can just order and order which I don’t know if that is your vision. I’d personally make some type of currency system where you have to buy the food maybe but then that would be getting close to that restaurant tycoon 2 sub game where you can work and order food.

I don’t really know but it is a good and bad game at the same time. I guess I am trying to say there is nothing really to keep players engaged or a want to even play the game.

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#3

Your game is alright, but I have a few problems with it. (Extremely long review incoming)

Review
  1. My PC is a toaster so it looks bad (thats more of a me problem that i have to deal with)
  2. Why are the snowmen T-posing their way around?
  3. Some of the faces are cut off, for example:
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  4. Some of the music is pretty up-beat and energetic and then it immediately goes into something calm and relaxing.
  5. T-posing snowmen.
  6. The animations could have work put into them.
  7. Read my bubble.
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  8. The snowmen were T-posing.
  9. I got to talk to a really nice snowman.
  10. THE SNOWMEN WERE LITERALLY T-POSING AROUND THE PLACE
  11. I like how you can share some food with others.
  12. Whatever is going on here.
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  13. Some foods which seem like they would take a bunch of bites can just be consumed with one click.
  14. snowmen t-posing around the place
  15. The UI is nice but some of it is stuff I wouldn’t notice at first.
  16. listen to me the snowmen were t-posing how wild is that
  17. I made friends with someone in a snowman restauraunt.
  18. t-posing snowmen
  19. Some songs do not fit in at all, which I said earlier, but these songs literally make no sense considering the game.
  20. Once you max out how many items you can place on a table then eat all of them, you can never place anything ever again on that table.
  21. the snowmen t-pose around the place

Overall, the game is alright, but it could have some work done on it.

Bonus

This is fun.

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#4

Awesome start to your game! I actually enjoyed playing. It’s a fun social hangout. Now, I do have a few critiques.

  • There isn’t anything to keep players coming back. Yes, it is a social game to hang out and meet new people and I like it, but I feel like it needs something more. Maybe you can become a snowman and work as a waiter?

  • I don’t like the tiny separate rooms. You could do one big room, or you could make bigger separate rooms separated not by doors, but by larger arches.

  • The order button in the order GUI is at the top, which makes it look like a title. I recommend moving it to the bottom. I was looking for how to submit an order for a while.

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  • I’d recommend letting everyone eat your food by default. It’s more fun that way. So that players don’t get annoyed not knowing how to turn it off, you could add a popup the first time a player gets their food eaten by another person asking if they’d like to change the setting.

  • I feel like it would be fun to be able to add more items on your table.

  • This is confusing… I thought they were two specific menu items. Make them wider to fit the frame and make them say “Classic Food” and “New Years Food.”

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  • It says all of the random snowman pets are 100% chance?

  • I’d love to have more social things such as emotes.

#5

Super sweet GUI. Really nice lighting effects. Good luck with your game!