Hello, I have just started doing Low-Poly type designs and builds. These are the builds that I have designed, can I please get your opinions on it x/10.
Thank You!
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The build on these looks really great, especially for some of your first designs. However, I think the neon you use in the windows really overpowers everything else. I would recommend using Smooth Plastic with some reflectance to give it a more-balanced look.
The neon overpowers like said above, so turn up the transparency for neon part to lower that. The builds are pretty good, I’d suggest you to make the pizza shop a little bigger.
Hello!
I think that your low poly builds are quite good, its definetly a start. However, those thrash bins on the second picture doesn’t quite speak up to me. They just don’t fit in with the rest of the build (Try to make your own bins).
Try to change the text on the fire station and the pizza place, pick different fonts!
(Try to experiment with them!).
Thats all! Good luck.
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The only problem I see here is some of the parts are not align at all.
Also one thing, I recommend you to not use free models. I know it’s a public model and everyone can use but the free models you’re using are not match well with the theme which is low poly.
Heya MrFieldThrow,
Thanks for sharing yar creations on the devforum. I think the buildings you have are pretty cool, especially the third one. So lets jump into it.
Firey station
This could be due to the image, but the windows are contrasting an awful lot with the rest of the building so this draws the eyes to the windows. To cure this, I would consider a lighter red for the fire station. As for the entire building, you want to have a smoother appearance. What I mean is that I can see individual parts in the roof, which does not reflect the common low-poly builds built in Blender.
Pizza shop
This one is pretty cool. I would definetly highlight the awning by making it bigger so that the entire building has more character. Also I would remove any meshes behind it, because these aren’t consistent with the low-poly style of detail, so they don’t fit.
Futuristic Building, guessing hotel
I think this one is great and have no critique for it. The colors pop, the building is unique and has a great style.
Overall, you have great work! Take my feedback however you want, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! Great job!
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Thanks for your feedback, I will be changing them.
Yes, those trash bins aren’t by builds, i’m planning to make my own meshes in the future. And I will change the text of the fire station and pizza place. Thank You
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Thanks! I will be changing the contrast of the fire station and pizza place. The fire station was my first build and you can see from the fire station to my futuristic Hotel! I will take in your feedback.
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