I am still learning a ton about 3d composition/animation, and I consider this to be a significant leap forward in my art, but obviously to the trained eye it likely has some flaws since im not a professional 3d artist.
Coming from a relatively untrained eye, I think it looks really good! The first second is a bit weird, but the firing animation is very nice!
It’s a rather unnatural transition down. Imagine trying to get into that position in real life. You wouldn’t be going a constant speed, or perfectly get into position, there would be a little bounce from your knees. I’d incorporate some momentum, perhaps leaning more against the wall.
I was aware of this after reviewing the full animation before rendering, but I didn’t want to mess with the crazy amount of sloppy keyframes. I will definately practice more animation regardless and it’ll take time to nail human momentum.
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Best of luck! It’s definitely coming along pretty well.
Nice dude! You can tell you spent quite a lot of time on this.
Only really one thing I noticed, the arm of the avatar goes through the wall, other than that it looks pretty good!