Hey guys, I just made my first advertisement for my group on Roblox. I would love for you guys to have some constructive criticism on it and help give me some tips for how I can make this advertisement better. One last thing is I made this ad on my chromebook. Thanks in advance!
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You could change the font to an eyecatching one and give your avatar there a pose! But it’s really cool as your first advertisement!! 
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Thank you, I really appreciate it! 
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You should improve the text, make it more striking and your avatar make it GFX or with a pose included
An example:
But to be your first ad, that’s fine! 
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Ok Great! Thanks for the help!
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I love the advertisement, sometimes you can enhance your ads by using background pictures, with blur affects, 2D shapes with outline, and definitely color theme too. When you have a good theme on your advertisement it will bring a lot of expression/meaning. I don’t do advertisements or GFX but as somebody who buys/order GFX many people use blender! I think you should give it a try too and see where it takes you. Other then that good luck!
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Ok thank you for the suggestion! It helps a lot!
If I came across this advertisement, I’d definitely click it!
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Why thank you! I really appreciate it!
Hey @ZEELZEKE, a lot of people have suggested to “improve the font”, but they really haven’t explained how. To add cool 3d text, you can use Text Studio (A free website). You can mess with the settings after you choose the font, it will really make the advert stick out.
The pose can definitely be improved (maybe make two poses, so it doesn’t look copy-and-pasted).
Good luck!
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Thank you for the website! I will definitely check it out! Thanks for the suggestions!
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This would make me want to click this over the other GFX ads, mostly because it reminds me of old roblox, good job. Though, if you wanted to make it more alive you could add GFX and 3D Text and perhaps if it’s Halloween themed make the background have some pumpkins maybe, and add some orange colour to it.
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I wouldnt click this.
1: The suits in the advertisement don’t look good
2: The text is quite obviously Calibri from paint.net
3: The color combo is VERY annoying (blue + orange + black)
4: Its 7 robux.
Not bad, but I would add maybe representation which clothes you can find on this group, plus I think the background could be a little bit more interesting.
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Looks nice, but I feel like the background and font are too be desired. Try making it be like a Halloween themed background
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