First build, 1 hour build...Almost realistic

This took me like an hour to make, I just started building so it might be weird and i was really taking my time. You are free to give any advice for me to improve.

Thank you.
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Looks great for a new builder! Here is my feedback :D!

  • Wood is too blocky, add wedges to give it a more connected feel!
  • Maybe recolor the wood a little lighter
  • Coconuts!

This is truly excellent, you should be pretty proud!

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Use another material or texture for the leaves and the woods?

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This is really good for your first build. Some things you can change is using the wood texture for the wood, and making the leaves a bit lighter.

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This looks great! You can also use unions to cut blocks to a more realistic shape. https://developer.roblox.com/en-us/articles/3D-Modeling-with-Parts

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It looks great! try to keep improving your build and you will be good on building :smiley:

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Looks epic!! You should add some coconuts and make the wood lighter tho

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