Hello guys, this is my first forum post, this is my first build since I’ve returned, except for an obby. Was hoping for feedback on how I can improve, I’m working towards a cartoon/realism style. Also the trees were made in blender.
*I am attempting to achieve a map built with real terrain. The map is cartoon style with some realism.
*I need feedback on what I have so far, maybe some feedback on more terrain and buildings.
This is wonderful for your first build, but I would consider lower the lighting brightness a bit since personally I think that it is too bright.
The terrain looks very cool, I like that you used the new grass in the terrain, but on the rocky spots, I would recommend making them a bit smaller, and I would also recommend trying to make the terrain a bit smoother.
The low poly trees were modelled very well, but I would say that you can change the color and make the leaves close to the terrain grass color and making the trunk color slightly darker.
And as for the house, I think that you could make the color a bit darker so that it fits more with the realistic style.
Overall it looks really good for your first build. One thing i recommend doing to make the terrain more appealing and less bumpy and rough is using the smooth tool to even everything out nicely. Good work and keep it up!
Thank you for the feedback, I’m going to try some of the tweaks now. And which part of the terrain smoother? All or the rocky areas?
Very good work considering this is your first attempt at using terrain for builds!
Hey!
I personally like the house and the next few comments are considering the fact that it is your first build.
Your lighting is pretty nice but it is very bright, I would maybe suggest lowering it down a bit.
The low poly trees look nice, but the colour of the leaves of the tree and the grass are very apart. Maybe you could try adding a bit more realistic colour to the leaves.
The colour of the house does not fit the realistic theme that your going for, so maybe you could try making it a bit darker and maybe add a porch to it to try to give it that finishing touch.
Best of luck in future developing.
