It looks like a good start but could use a lot of work in my opinion.
I don’t think the textures fit or could use some tweaking, especially on the long wood shelf/desk thing because it looks pretty stretched. I am assuming it is a work in progress but the room is very empty even for something that looks modern it could overall use more furniture.
Also, I personally don’t like forced 1st person, but that has nothing to do with the build.
Now, the thing is; I want to make the middle look a little empty. I made a carpet to give it some decoration but I want it empty so that the player can have lots of space to move.