Hello!
I just started learning how to make character gfx and I am requesting feedback.
Here are the renders:
Thanks!
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This is of very high quality and I am not A Roblox artist but I do not think it could me faulted in any way as this is a very high quality image ,which has used shadows 3D effects and more, so I believe for this image it could be used as an in game image ,advertisement, thumbnail or me sold in the library.
[Edit] I have just noticed the gun does slightly clip the hand and this may want to be changed.
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You should try adding more bend to the arms when you want to render something, the lighting could also be worked on for when you decide to start selling your work for robux or real money, whichever you prefer, and maybe look into making a watermark for the entire image so it’s not so easily stolen/masked.
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The lighting is a bit harsh in my opinion, especially seeing the glare on the arms in the first render you have. It may help to use HDRIs to get more realistic and overall nicer looking environment. That way, there won’t be greenish, dark looking shadows that you wouldn’t necessarily want.
To make the render even more realistic, as said you should try bending the arms and posing the legs, ex. making the character look much more engaged in what it is doing. And in order to complex the scene overall, try adding more characters when you’re comfortable and think you’ve had enough practice.
You’ve got a lot of potential – keep up the good work!
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Hi,
It looks pretty nice for first time renders.
To make it better, I recommend getting a character rig to bend the limbs. Paint is a pretty good rig. I’d also fix the lighting, it seems a bit harsh on the character, using an HDRI will get more realistic lighting. I’d also change the color of the noob, it doesn’t quite match the colors of the classic roblox noob, but that’s probably because of the lighting. Try using curves or anything to blend the noob into the background, right now it looks like you just took a photo and pasted your render on it.
Hope my advice helps, good luck!
-RolandStudio
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