Hello! Hope you like my first ever model! And also, if you have time please give it feedback, and also be as critical as you want, because I really want to improve on modeling!
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Nice,altough. Can you render the result,it would look more good
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Yo man really nice work for you first model!!!
Feedback wise. Maybe make the bite of the ice-cream a bit more realistic. Other than that, amazing job keep it up!
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perhaps add like liquid that is for the melting icecream 
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Thanks! I’ll keep that in mind for next time, thanks again!
The ice-cream isn’t melting, someone took a bite (not me), But thanks you for the note! I’ll try it!
It looks really good. It could be a UGC, if you ask me
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Hey there,
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Good Job! My first render was the default Cube 
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Looks good. One thing I’d say though is that the bite doesn’t really look natural, unless you’re somehow able to bite off smoothly lol. Making the edges of the bite unnatural rather than smooth would make it much better.
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This is really good. The detail stands out to me. The one thing I would change is the inside color. Tbh the light brown in the inside of the pop does not stand out. If it were up to me I would maybe make it white for vanilla or strawberry color. Keep up the good work I blender. Soon your going to be a blender pro.
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This is really cool, I think you did a really good job. You should have tried to add like bite marks on it to add the realistic vibe to it.
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it is great to work it is a lot better than my first creation and you should work more on texture
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Hey, this is a great first model and since you want to improve as much as possible I have some suggestions, aswell as some advice.
–Suggestions–
1- Next model you do, make sure if you do shade something smooth always add an edge split modifier (unless it messes the model up, but if it does that then you probably need to fix some topology)
2- it looks sort of like the person who bit off on the icecream had no teeth. to prevent this I suggest booling into the icecream instead of sculpting the area which was supposed of been biten off of. (Boolean tutorial/documentary: Boolean Modifier — Blender Manual )
- the stick to the icecream bar is very pointy, to prevent this I would use a cylinder, grab one half of the cylinder while in wireframe mode and moving it along the x/y axis depending on which half you grabbed it. Then rotating the whole stick the opposite axis of the x/y one that you used and positioning it as you please.
–Advice–
I understand it is your fist model, which makes it impressive. When I was learning Blender I practiced everyday and watched at least 2 tutorials each day, I suggest you do the same. Have a good day I hope this helped! 
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