Hello everyone! This is my first gfx I have ever made and I would just like some harsh feedback (: . Thanks!! - BMWLux
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Has very bloom effect. Try to use cycles.
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Actually your GFX, is honestly great, however if possible, maybe just make the title of the game below the “Noob” model, that’s all! However the GFX does look very good though, and maybe make the sword have a bright reflection as well.
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Yes I agree ill do that today (:
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Pretty solid stuff. It’s simple and pleasing to look at. Top job.
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Thank you so much!! Ima try to make another and see how it compares (:
I think the player and the sword should switch materials / reflectiveness.
The player shouldn’t be shiny and the sword should be shiny.
It looks like he isn’t holding the sword.
Posing is kind of poor and the character should be looking at the camera.
The detail on the character doesn’t match the 5 colored lines that make up the background.
Also I feel like a Soldier Simulator would have a more intense less cheerful Game Icon.
It would be better if it was called “Knight Simulator” if you’re basing it off of the timeline when they used swords to fight.
Ok thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback a lot!
A whole lot better than my first GFX - very impressed. There are a few things that you could touch up on but you’ll learn along the way. I can’t wait to see you progress. 
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