First GFX I've ever made

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#1

Hi everyone this is the first GFX I’ve ever made, please give some feedback, thanks!

FIRST GFX
FIRST GFX3000×1080 1.45 MB

#2

I don’t think a bullet is that big.

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#3

I like the spark effect, but the bullet should be a lot smaller.

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#4

Ok thanks, I’ll make sure to make it a bit smaller

#5

Here’s what it looks like with a smaller bullet, Screenshot by Lightshot

#6

For your first GFX, good job, although I have some suggestions. Firstly, The grass is very pixelated, making it look more like a green blob. Also, the sky looks far too blank with the line between the ground and sky being rough. The bullet is far too large, so try to scale that down. Overall, I think the colors just need to match better with better shading, but otherwise, great job on your first piece.

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#7

Make it smaller. Place it next to the barrel for reference.

#8

I really like your gun and the spark effects. However, you could add some stuff to the reddish brown sky, or what I believe is a sky. My first impression about that brownish red background was that it was an evening sky. If it is an evening sky, I recommend adding some stars. Even if it isn’t at least add something, or else right now it looks too blank.
Also, I think you could also add some stuff to the grass, like flowers because it is also kind of boring.

Overall, my favorite part of it was the sniper you made :smiley:

#9

For a first Gfx this looks good I suggest u use some better look grass to make it look like u are actually on it.

#10

I can tell you used roblox studio for this. This is understandable cause studio is way more straight forward first thing for GFX I’d say just never use studio to position and stuff like that I find it quite shabby tbh I’d go for Blender and not C4D simply because More people use lt. Third USE A RIG there are different types of rigs but I think you should start with Paint rig v3 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KLgfOlQSwDM) Then when you get the hang of that use AlexGFX Nexus Rig V2.0 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDyfzt4IClc&list=PLiqfMJJMhCusD2RwkKWb8ES5VJeGfSlym&index=4) After that I suggest using Matt rbx’s Ultimate rig (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Torc8qEOXxE) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KLgfOlQSwDM That is how to start and use a rig btw. Hope this helped! Good luck On future works.