First-ish Try at doing a logo GFX kinda thing

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#1

I made this cafe logo, the text is kinda slanted im new to doing it. Please give tips. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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#2

for your first try i think its pretty good, but if you want tips i would say if its an ad for a bakery put pastries in the backround, you know what i mean. But in the meantime just keep practicing.

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#3

Here are my biggest critiques:
The gfx looks like it was taken as a screenshot of a posed rig in roblox studio, or rendered in blender internal. The camera angle also looks pretty weird like it is trying to highlight her forehead.
The text looks like you took seperate letters and arranged them together, which makes them uneven.
So I would suggest

  1. Rendering it in Cycles Render or Eevee
  2. Making the camera angle more adjusted and refined OR making the pose to be facing the camera.
  3. Adjusting and polishing the text
    Overall, good starter GFX! :slightly_smiling_face: :+1:
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#4

Hey,it’s really good. i like the cupcake :grin:

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#5

think its a muffin???

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