So I have been doing some low poly lately and I have made low poly mountains and stuff just never a building. Here is my first build tell me what you think of it.
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the 2 windows on the side that are tilted don’t really work, I recommend straightening them out and adding the same overhand you’ve have on the left side to the right.
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Eh, it could use some improvements. I think the text should be placed somewhere else, and the windows on the right side are not straightened. The white line on the bottom of the building is overlapping with the door. The colors do not pop in a good way. I would change the door’s color to a light brown with a wood material. The white line triangle is kinda “Wonky”, meaning the line is not a parallel and the lines do not match symmetrically. I like you’re idea, but there’s some improvements.
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Pretty nice! I’ll give you some hints!
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You should add something behind the text, or make it atleast smaller. It is kinda hard to read plus it floats.
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Connect the top of the roof with both parts.
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Try other windows, the 2 small windows aren’t fitting for the building.
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Some parts are colliding, please fix that.
That’s all! Have a good day!!
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I made the like that on purpose, I thought it would look more goofy
That looks really cool! Although, the text above the building feels like it should be on a sign or poster, and the windows on the right are inconsistent with the windows on the left. What I mean by that, is that you should either make all the windows tilted in some sort of way, or make them all straight. Either way, nice build. Looks great.
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Thanks for the clarification! I didn’t know if that was intended or…
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Mhm. Not bad at all but I think you can improve it and add more details! Good work also for be the first time doing it!
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For "center, it doesn’t make sense that the E and the R would be levitating in the air.
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The text on the sign is sort of hard to read, so maybe add a border or something that will make it stand out more. Also, the colors of this build could be lightened so that it fits the low-poly style more.
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The building style has a good start, I am guessing you are trying to achieve a detailed low poly look? If so, decent job. However, the details seem to be lacking. The scene seems a bit bland at first glance.
It looks pretty decent since this is your first attempt at creating this kind of theme, however, in my opinion, I would recommend adding and changing the color scheme up a bit blue windows and blue building don’t match in my opinion, maybe try going for a different color to the build like a red, or yellow color the one you’re going for doesn’t match the color scheme maybe try removing the awning on the building, as in my opinion it doesn’t look good.
Maybe add a small window on the door and possibly detail the door a bit on the building maybe have a more unique shape so it could look more detailed even though your going for a goofy type of build is the building suppose to look all basic and not fully detailed?
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