Hello, I’m a new creator of gfx designs and I’m seeking feedback for my latest gfx, If yall think it’s bad feel free to tell me all about it. 
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This is absolutely stunning! And the fact that this is your first gfx?? You definitely have a talent here. I honestly don’t have any constructive criticism. Awesome work!!
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I had some tests but this is the first scene I have completed. It was for a game but they chose someone else’s design except mine 
floating zombie be like…
the posing and stuff is good, but i find it super weird that all three people have fired at the exact same time. the smoke is also great, but the lighting and posing need some work. the ground looks l ike a texture, maybe add bump map or add bumps in manual? and add rocks and stuff like that. its very good for ur first gfx, 6.5/10
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Oh wow, you really know how to find the worst in everyone. 
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Thanks, I did add a bump map I just didn’t increase the strength enough. Yeah, my lighting is a bit crap and the floating zombie, I kinda moved the ground a bit before that, should have noticed. 
Looks nice, one thing I don’t like is the lighting. My brain doesn’t know where to focus, even though you have Rules Of Thirds applies. Try learning how to use lighting in blender
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That’s exactly what I’m looking for. I want my face to be pointed at all the mistakes so I never due them again 
He’s not finding worst in anyone. He’s an experienced blender user and I can guranteed tell you, that if a blender artist is reviewing your work, they would care about every single pixel of the image.
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Thanks. Im working on something Lighting based right now to learn it a bit more
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you need smoother lighting and better zombies. they look too normal right now. (they need blood and ripped limbs lol but idk if that allowed if u use for game)
also light up the back corrider a little bit!
this arm is bent weirdly. no person can do that. 
and that zombie is positioned weirdly.
legs look short and weird. and floating a little
amd add blood to zombies being shot and make the zombies coming from corridor look more reckless and running and zombie-like and dumb
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Dude I really wanted to add blood. But in this situation, I couldn’t as it was for a game and the guy was worried it might be too brutal. I bent the arm as if it was “broken” Plus, the guy kept telling me to move the camera closer to the main characters, but otherwise, it would look something like this:
(this was a test so it looks crap)
in my opinion, its a little better because I can fit more zombies, also I was forced to use the models from the game and they look like that
bruh.
that random zombie arm and leg running away just looks weird.
the pistol goes into his hand.
is that a giant zombie?
legs look a little weird
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I put it in his hand to make it seem as if he is holding it, I took an example from Minecraft’s ways of holding things. Rookie mistake lol.
Its really good, reminds me of oldschool roblox game pictures but with better graphics, Keep up the amazing work!
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Thanks! I’m working on something I will use lots of light on to improve.