First Shop Build

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#1

Hey Dev Forum Members! I have recently been working on my first shop build. Any feedback is appreciated! :slight_smile:

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#2

It’s amazing, I love it. Pretty simple and cartoony look.

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#3

It’s like what w1xx said. It’s a cartoony look! At first glance, I thought it was a gui lol.

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#4

Thanks! I think the cartoony type of look is amazing. :slight_smile:

#5

Looks great, keep up the good work. :+1:

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#6

Looks great I really like the details.

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#7

It looks great! The detail and design of it looks clean.

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#8

:+1: Looks awesome. I love the cartoony look it has to it.

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#9

I absolutely love the design of the shop. It looks, very polished and the color scheme matches the building this would look good in a simulator game. Secondly, you could try using a variety of shapes, it allows the shop to look more lively and not just some blocky approach I’m not a fan of the roof color I would try going for a grey color to look more better.

Create a door handle, that could look slightly outwards. I would recommend adding some detail to the top (the roof) such as vents, maybe instead of having the roof look plain I think that will add a nice touch to your design since this is your first low poly design. I believe it could use some improvements you could possibly add some sort of detail on the outside or on the shop like a sign if possible.

Overall, it’s a decent model

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#11

I love the cartoony vibe! It looks so good!

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#12

Looks great! I really like the glare aspect on your windows.

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#13

I really like the design, with a cartoony aesthetic, only thing that stands out to me is the roof, or the lack of something on it. I’m sure its just the angle, or maybe you have future plans for it, but in the picture provided it looks a bit odd

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#14

Love the aesthetic! Really captures a good cartoony vibe.

Suggestions:

  • Not gonna lie, it’s pretty barren. you should probably add more parts here and there.

  • The bushes looks like it needs more detail than 2 blocks. But if you were going for that, ignore this suggestion.

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#15

I’ll work on the roof more! Thanks for the feedback. :smile:

#16

Thank you! This is the feedback that I was looking for. :smile:

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#17

Definitely add more bricks onto the build, it looks very plain and simple. Other than that, I actually like the aesthetic vibe the build vibe gives me for some reason, it’s great for a first low poly build.

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#18

Like the way you designed the shop mixes well. :purple_heart: