First showcase game

It’s a Japanese city, where people are excavating it. I need some feedback, because I don’t know if it’s good or not.

If you could reply in the comments, would be super helpful! Thanks! <3

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I like the overall feel and design of the place looks vert well made.

The form and buildings are fairly good. The Japanese light seems to have the right of the design and look consider adding a few of those hanging on the outside connected to the building and the terrain elevation has good levels of small hills that make it look better instead of a plain design for the city. I could recommend adding a few dug holes or open up spots so it could look like it’s been excavating, if this is needed.

Maybe some rocky tunnels or caves could help make the scene look more detail at the moment it looks a little too Quiet? The buildings seem to match up very well with the small objects, overall placing a few different types of building could make it look more interesting instead of them looking all repetitive if you know what I mean all in all, it looks good.

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The buildings look good and well built. I think the super yellow atmosphere is a bit harsh, so maybe turn it down just a little bit and use a yellow skybox.

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The build is well made indeed but the sunlight and the lighting effect is too much of a yellow color. Turn that down a little, that’ll help!

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Tokyo magnitude 5.0 vibes

I like it! I think some of tress should be knocked down though.

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Probably should of added this photo

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The game looks really good. The lighting and overall design of this showcase looks extraordinary. I like the design of the models a whole lot, and I could tell right off the bat that I know what I was looking at.

Due to the limit of screenshots you’ve provided, I would like to play this and give the games feedback on it when I’m in that showcase alone. I would add more nature to this other than trees, however, here are my suggestions below.

  • Bushes
  • Rocks
  • Flowers
  • Mushrooms
  • More types of plants

Tone down on the yellow and add more variety to the place besides trees