First time drawing my roblox avatar. Would like some advice

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#1

Wondering if my art is welcome here since I don’t see alot of 2d stuff on roblox

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#2

Its just amazing, good job. Love the detail

#3

No advice needed from me it’s awesome

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#4

W O W

that is amaaaaziiiing

how?

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#5

  1. I thought the Poptart wasn’t in her mouth for a moment. I thought it was floating. Maybe making the nose more noticeable would fix that.

  2. I think you overdid her stockings squeezing her thighs. Most animes don’t usually draw them like that. Her blood circulation looks like it could be cut off. :sob:

  3. Did she slip and fall due to the puddle?

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#6
  1. I’ve already put shading under her nose to indicate it as much as I could
  2. I tried to give her a squishy thigh look
  3. Yes, she is stupid
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#7

SO COOL! I LOVE IT! Change nothing! :smiley: