(I forgot to texture everything apart from the bridge lmao)
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I actually really like this, the bridge is really well textured and the wooden prongs sticking out the ground surprisingly add a lot of detail to the GFX. What I would suggest however, is to make the grass a little more detailed as well as the rocks. It look like you worked really hard on the bridge and not the scenery 
. Nevertheless, I think this looks amazing.
Good Luck!!!
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Everything about this screams quality but you might need to at least unfocus the flashlight’s pointer so it blends in with the environment at best.
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Honestly, this needs more improvements. The lighting isn’t very well positioned. Try to add lamps near the GFX so I can see better.
It’s a pretty nice GFX for a beginner like you, a lot of people had problems with the textures at the start, but there are still a lot of room for improvement. Since everything is not textured besides the bridge, it doesn’t fit in at all. Textures are sometimes not necessary in some scene renders. Secondly, the legs of the character are pretty stiff for a walking pose, you can search for references for the pose or look at other GFX artist’s poses. Besides that, the lighting from the flashlight seems a bit messed up, the flashlight is glowing in a weird way, I think you should fix that. Lastly, it looks a bit empty on the upper-left corner, maybe you can add more rocks there. Overall, great job, keep it up!
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Very cool, you can improve it, but very good for your first time.
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The GFX actually looks very good. However, you should still change the textures of the stones and the grass and position the light from the flashlight a little better so that it looks even more realistic.