First time making a trailer for my game

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#1

I’ve created a little social hangout game called the Salieri, It’s a little Jazz club and I thought i’d create a little trailer for it, It’s not the greatest but any opinions or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Trailer - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFTiJOkDa-g

The game link itself also if you want to see if I’ve captured it’s atmosphere very well - 🎺 Salieri's 64 | Jazz Bar - Roblox

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#2

That trailer is really good! Especially for your first time!

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#3

nice stuff, i’d make the camera follow a predetermined path instead of being piloted by the cameraman and speed up the historical introduction, otherwise all good

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