Hello my fellow developers! I hope everyone is having a wonderful day, and thanks for stopping by and seeing my art. I hope you guys and girls like it I worked very hard to make this possible. I wish all of you good luck on your projects and stay safe!
This sucks
At being bad.
Only thing I’d change is the sky texture. Awesome work! Oh and for your watermark, just to let you know, you aren’t allowed to use the Roblox logo in your logo.
Thanks for the reply, however I read all the rules and there was nothing saying that I can’t use the ROBLOX Logo in my GFX. Many of my Developer friends use it.
Graphic design seems pleasing to the eye. The shadows and use of lighting is very nice, however there are a few things i would suggest the following.
From my point of view the background are/ is fairly empty. It’s not something that interest me i would perhaps include a boat, plain in the sky or something along those lines maybe a smaller island out in the water to make it look less empty and bland instead of having the background with just a plain sky.
You can use mountains or models to cover up the background the water looks weird it almost looks like there’s too different waters implemented in the scene.
Perhaps include a fishing rod in the girl sitting on the dock to make it more interesting and attractive, don’t have the characters looking towards the camera, have them socializing, and talking to each other. It’s good though the background, just needs more details.
Looks good, however some things I personally think would make it better would be these:
As previously mentioned by other users, the fishing rod’s too bland. Adding a texture or adding more details to the rod would make it more appealing.
I would also add a texture to the wooden planks, they would look like plastic planks if it weren’t for the colour.
Making the watermark a bit smaller (not too small which makes it easy to steal, mind you). You want the main attraction to be the GFX, not the watermark lol.
(this is just extra). I would put the person with the fish bucket more in front or make it stand out compared to the others since it being a fishing GFX and that person has the fish it would make it more obvious that it was a fishing GFX (except for the fishing rod obv.)
Adding more to the background, e.g a boat so it’s not just the sky and the sea.
Giving the characters a role. Don’t make them just pose to the camera, but give them a reason for them to be in the GFX to make it more fascinating.
Sorry if it came out as harsh, trust me I wasn’t trying to be. I like this GFX a lot and think that with a bit more practise and attention to detail you have potential to become one the best GFX artist on the platform. Great work! Can’t wait to see your next one!
add textures and improve on the water. also,when making a jetty the wood near the water should be more darker because of the water splashing against the wood.
seen of your gfx i think you should learn a bit more about your program
It does not state I cannot use it. As it says on the first sentence, “You may not use the logo “Roblox” in the name or Title of any item” This is art work, not a item, as I said before many of my friends that are developers use this logo and they have not gotten warned.
Thanks so much for the reply do not worry I take all the tips I can get and turn them into a even better GFX. I was going to add a boat but my PC almost crashed in the process thank you so much for the support.
If you go to my other post, It says that Im starting using these type of GFX’s. I’ve been doing these type of GFX’s for 2 days only so my skills are not that great. Which is the reason the water looks a bit bad.