Fortress for a team feedback

Hello, I am attempting to achieve a two sided team map, this map will include a playing field as well as some fortress/spawn buildings for the players.

I spent a few hours today building this fortress, please let me know what you think of it/ways it can improve :slight_smile:. Building is by far not my strong point. (Also this is meant to look low poly/cartoony)




Thanks,

Pyxrien.

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It looks great my only suggestion is to remove the checkerd walls on the inside

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Okay, great thanks. Do you have any suggestions of ways to make the back wall more than just grey?

Thank.

Pyxrien.

Try adding textures because the fortress looks pretty bland.

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Yeah,

What sort of textures do you think I could use to stay with the cartoony look?

Thanks,
Pyxrien.

You could use a cobblestone texture or a brick texture. If you want to roll with a cartoony theme, make the cobblestone and brick texture cartoony. Otherwise, Great Job!

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Made some improvements… Thanks for the suggestion! I think it looks wayyyyy better now :smiley:



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THIS IS WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT! Something like this is amazing, and my only other piece of advice is that you should change the spawn point into something like they spawn on a piece of armor. This leads to my second piece of advice, which is to make it like a fortress, by adding debris, stuff on fire, and other stuff that would be on a battleground. Other than this, it looks amazing and I hope that your game becomes successful!

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Wow man!

You’ve been a great help, thank you so much for all your time and feedback, really appreciate it!

Pyxrien.

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You’re welcome. I know a lot about this because I’ve made a lot of fortresses, cartoony or not! I hope your game becomes successful and your fortress turns out good!

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So far it looks good! For me, I don’t see any issues with it. You did a great job! keep up the good work!

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Man, I love devforum!

Everyone’s so positive and kind, thank you! :smiley:

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