Fossil Find - Part 2!

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#23

is this better lol

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#24

much better lol :blush: :blush:

#25

the rock look kinda weird, just have only ground and a bit of rock maybe but yes definitely way better (also add debris on top like tools and terrain considering the fact the ground just collapsed)

#26

so boxes and tools scattered around as if the world just ended and came back to life?

#27

No, I meant from what they were previously used to dig it up (also change the color of the bones because it looks like a dinosaur just died and came fresh out of it lol)

#28

Check this out!

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anything else I could add or change?

#29

what happened to the other one? before it looked way better

#30

other pic? i changed most of it should the rock come back or what crates?

#31

that pic was when I “ran” the game

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@sam_0987654321best

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#33

this one?? :grinning: :grinning: :grinning:

#34

really nice, just try to make the surrounding terrain more organic (less square)

#35

Ok pls tell me anythign else because i wanna publish my showcase lol

#36

it’s pretty good for now, you can always update your showcase in the future

#37

Ok thx for all the wonderful help!

#38

Add some trees around and add some sun rays. Other than that its pretty good. Next time try to put your best effort to making this showcase. I like it hope to see more showcases like this!
@Truthful_Shadow

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#39

I think the car is a bit too close to the cliff.

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#40

Thx! for the feedback!! I really appreciate it!

#41

Hello Developer,

I really like the idea! Yet what could make your showcase even more interesting, would be a plot to it. In one of my showcases for example, I use my past as the base of it. I showcase memories and bad experiences I have been through in my life in that showcase, which just gives the player a better look into the build, and into my life as well. If you would like to check it out, you can do that here:

[SHOWCASE] Crash’s Office - Roblox

I feel like you should remove the NPC’s as well, and change the cones to more blocky/retro styled cones because that would fit the fossil. Because if the fossil is blocky, and the cones are round-shaped meshes, I don’t think it fits well.

Other than that, I like the idea, and I would love to see what you will do with this in the future.

Have a good one!

Cheers,
CrashFacts

#42

Thx this advice will sure help my builds alot thx alot @ValkyrieHuskyy

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