Game I made in twenty-four hours

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#1

Hello Developers!

As a personal challenge, I decided to make a game in only twenty four hours (original, I know) and this is what I was able to make. Currently, player data does not save, so please don’t comment about that, but I would like some feedback on the game.

Link: Game in 24 hours challenge - Roblox

Have a good day,
Lucid

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#2

I think you did a great job but the main thing I would say as a programmer is the selection system.

Its a bit difficult to click on the different objects, if you made for example a raycasting system it would be smoother (example: right now if you move your character so you mouse is over a plot of land, it won’t notice it until you move your mouse)

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#3

Pretty okay for the time spent.

Critiques:

  • When purchasing seed upgrades, the player shouldn’t be able to downgrade unless you add a type of rebirth system. I purchased Tier 2 after Tier 3 on purpose to test this, and I can no longer equip Tier 3 seeds despite owning them.

  • The gameplay feels quite slow, allow the player to do things at a much faster pace.

Definitely keep going! I would highly recommend making progression feel seamless and adding visually satisfying features.

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#4

Fun little game. A couple of suggestions if you wanted to take it further:

  1. Add a central market to buy and sell stuff
  2. Limit how much harvested wheat a player can carry based on a container size
  3. Allow the player to buy both seed and upgraded containers at the market
  4. Allow players to buy more fields
    5 Profit
    Good luck
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