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#1

Hey! Recently I started practicing doing art for Roblox game.
I would like some feedback on this gamepass I made.

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#2

More detail needed, its way to simple. Just looks like a drawing, not something to be sold.

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#3

You should add more detail, it’ll look better.

#4

I love it! I don’t really think you need more detail on the character, probably more detail on the background. It looks very plain, the character is beautiful though!

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#5

Alright! I do agree that the background is pretty plain. I will make sure to work on that!

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#6

Very nice drawing!

There’s nothing wrong with taking a simple, minimalistic approach. I think being “too simple” is much better than having too much detail going on (“too crowded” you could say). I’d also like to address the first two comments by saying that to tell someone to “add more detail” is very ambiguous and vague; it’s not meaningful feedback. Exactly what sort of ‘details’ could be added?

Some next steps I’d like to suggest would be to consider adding some text to help indicate that it is a gamepass. Right now, it looks like a profile picture/icon more than it does a gamepass. The other suggestion would be to rework the outline of the character’s t-shirt so that it stands out a little bit more, perhaps using black or even a darker shade of red. And as already mentioned, the background could use some texture, although in my opinion, it’s not entirely necessary.

Hope I’ve been able to help.

#7

Hello,

You have good talent… I could never pull something off like that. But In my view and opinion it’s a little too simple. Now, as @ExiledTitan has stated bring simple isn’t bad or wrong, but the backgrounds too plain as @Y0BOT has brought up. Add a couple more small details here and there and you should be good to go.

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#8

Bit of an update!

  1. I realized that the previous background wasn’t showing very well, so I changed it.
    @Y0BOT was the one who suggested this originally
  2. I added some text to show what it was for, which was suggested by @ExiledTitan
    Here is the updated version
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#9

that looks much better. the backround is less bland.

#10

I like the art style and how simple it is, nice job!

#11

I love it! Keep up the great work! :slight_smile: