GFX feedback (First gfx)

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That’s very good!

Tip: Add a watermark on your gfx if you don’t want someone to steal your gfx :wink:

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Thank you! Honestly right now I don’t consider my work being stolen a huge deal. I will of course start watermarking my work as I start to get more advanced.

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I find that hard to believe THAT’S YOUR FIRST GFX

It looks really great! You did an incredible job making it! :open_mouth:

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The legs seem to clip into the hood of the car. Other than that it’s really good. Lighting is pretty good.
This is a minor detail but I can see the edge of the road and I don’t think roads in the middle of a desert have sidewalks.

7.5/10

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It looks awesome! I also can’t belive this is your first GFX :0

Anyways, try to fix the hat displacement too!

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Quality is great! You pretty much nailed the lighting and the prop placement.

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first gfx omg i love the effects and the lighting! especially the car though it doesn’t QUITE look like he’s sitting on the car

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For the future I’d recommend working on posing a bit since this bend is slightly awkward as well as materials like messing with roughness and such on the car

the camera placement could be improved on here’s some tips for better compositions 10 Tips to make Your 3D Render more Cinematic - YouTube good job especially since this is your first and good luck on other projects!

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Really Good! Besides for the fact that the legs are clippin’

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Thank you, thank you. I actually did try to fix the legs but it just messed everything else up so I just said screw it.

edit the materials, use cycles, and NEVER use HDRIs for backgrounds unless if for the sky