GFX Feedback [Im new]

This is the 3rd GFX Game icon I ever made any feedback?

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Well, very good attempt.
The effect you have used puts me off and so does the pose.
What program did you use for the render?

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Good Render, But the Effect ruins the vibe, I would recommend using a better Background, not using the multiplier effect, and concentrating on the Quality of the GFX.

Good luck in your future Commissions! :grin:

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I used blender to render, i added the effect on my own.

Thank you.

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The static effect really throws me off, considering there’s no background or text in your GFX. You should work on adding an environment around the render to make it look a lot better, rather than just keeping it plain with no background. The environment around renders really brings out the style and looks in the eyes of others.

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Thanks for all of the feedback.

Wow. This is awesome! Love the effect. Maybe add a background?

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This is a good attempt at a render, I would suggest using less white-space for the background to improve the overall render with more interesting camera angles and poses.

I like how you went for a digitalised approach for the post-processing as well, looks vibrant.

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Good job, it’s decent work. I advise you to adjust your rendering settings to improve the resolution of the render. Using a light-room will enhance your lighting, you can use HDRIs if you want the naturalistic feels. Refine your pose: legs seems out of shape. Rigs can fix issues with poses amazingly. The ‘static’ effect doesn’t work well with the render and possibly try using a background with overlays.

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Great, I suggest getting a rig as it makes posing so much easier.

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It’s alright but why is there a blue and red outline? I would also suggest adding more shading.

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xd,i noticed you used the effect bill wuartz uses in his vids,neon effect.Regarding your GFX,it looks great,but i think changing/making the wallpaper,would give an better look at it.

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Wow! Very Cool!
i recommend using blurs to make it cooler tho

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Nice effect but very bland and low quality. Up your sample count and use better lighting.

HDRI for realistic lighting or 3 point lighting for more cartoony lighting.

I’d also recommend using a rig, I’d recommend PaintRigV3.

Thanks and have a good day.

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