Hello Everyone! I’m presenting you my second Roblox GFX called Le “Jungle Attack” 
I’m really happy how this came out after considering that this is my second ever gfx that I’ve made 
I’ve taken some advice from my last post and I was fully focused on these things that were pointed out the most.
Feel free to comment down below constructive criticism so I could improve on my future work"
Hope you will like it! 
Le Work:
I don’t do GFX, so I don’t have any right to give you constructive criticism and whatnot. So I’ll just get straight to the point.
You’re amazing and talented, the lighting is just so smooth.
Considering it’s your first one, it looks pretty good.
Actually, it’s his second one.
I’m really happy how this came out after considering that this is my second ever gfx that I’ve made
But yes, I do agree. He’s very talented for a beginner,
Appreciate the words! Even If you are not gfx artist you still may see some imperfections, but anyways thanks!
Haha, Thanks! Trying my best
You are so good in GFX. Good job!
Thank youuu soo much!! Trying to master this craft 
The katana is clipping through your leg.
Honestly, I don’t remember seeing this good GFX in a while.
It looks like it but it’s a shadow The katana is pointed up so it looks like it’s going through the leg, I’ve noticed that too.
Well, thank you so so much! Trying my best to create a better GFX every time I’m making one. 
Another thing. The knifes look like they are coming out of nowhere.
Well, I’ve had my mindset set on a story while I’m creating a work of mine. So these ruined daggers are shattered/broken and they got an ability to break and self-repair, so basically if I will send them to attack something/someone then they will break, come back, and repair.
Basically something like Summoning Swords from Devil May Cry ability of (Vergil).
pretty nice, but you need to fix a few things: 1.
lighting.
you are doing a bad job of lighting up your character
2. posing
because of your lighting, we can’t see the posing properly and it makes the character look deformed.
3. scene
its really nice except the background is. wayyy too bright and the character should be getting some of that work too
Lots of talent! You have extreme potential!!
My suggestion is that the character doesn’t really seem like the main part, the sun/light in the back is nice, but it’s too bright and takes away attention from it. It also seems as if the rest of the body is pitch black, and I’m not sure what pose the character’s doing.
Overall it’s really nice, so keep it up!
I mainly take pose inspiration from anime characters and their poses. I went for the jumping on you pose if I can call it like that. Also, I kinda overexposed the picture 
Since the sunlight comes from the back the character should be dark since it’s closer to you and less light hits the character mainly hitting edges. I may be wrong but this is just my take so don’t take it seriously 
I go for that specific moody almost blendy style where I’m trying to make the character look like he belongs there but I might change that just for roblox 
Also, thanks for the response really appreciate it!
