Gfx feedback please! Second entry!

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#1

Hi! Can I have some feedback on my gfx? Here is some info:

  1. What do you want to achieve out of feedback?

I want to become a great gfx designer! I want to be told that I am good at it and that they like what I do.

  1. What did you want feedback on?

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  1. How do you do it?

I draw everything by hand. I use an iPad and Apple Pencil. I use the app called ProCreate.

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#2

Looks good, just curios on why the character is missing a face. Also I believe this should be in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations.

#3

I did it on purpose lol. I got better right?

#4

No, it is feedback. It goes here :slight_smile:

#5

The lighting still needs more improvement, try to either use a modelling software or shade your GFX.

#6

Switched the category to #help-and-feedback:cool-creations, as it should be. There is a lack of technical and specific details to cover enough to count towards #help-and-feedback:art-design-support, where you generally ask about techniques than the entire work of an asset.

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#7

If you have a computer, definitely start doing it in at least Roblox studio, even better, blender.
I like it overall, but it looks 2D, which could techically still be a gfx…? :thinking:
Very nice tho! :smiley:

#8

That’s pretty impressive stuff drawing all that by hand-especially that phone

#9

I’d say work on posing, the way the arm twists to hold the phone seems very unrealistic, excluding that I think that it looks amazing!

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#10

Hello, I think it is good as it was created on ProCreate. Maybe add in some shadows to define more light and contrast into the image. This will define more depth into your work and shows which parts stand out more. :+1:

#11

It looks okay. The background is really nice though could use more details. The lighting is a bit weird which not sure what looks weird so probably have to experiment with that a bit. I think the skin is too orange. The phone also looks like a texture so would suggest modeling a phone for it. Also add a face since it looks weird. It’s over all okay but could use a lot of improvement.

(And also what do you mean it was drawn with an apple pencil? Is it like a 2d drawing? It doesn’t look like a 2d drawing so)

#12

What’s Good:

  • Colors
  • Leaves Design

What Needs Improvement:

  • SHADING!!!
  • Posing
  • Background
  • Make the plant a bit lower so it’s more in the picture
  • Character looks stretched vertically, especially around the torso/lower torso area

Hope this helps! :slight_smile:

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#13

I drew it with a Apple Pencil, yes. It is the first one so it does help you it is just like a stylus pen

#14

Looks kinda weird without a face though

#15

Yeah, I forgot to add blush!! It would of looked better.

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