GFX feedback wanted

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#1

So this is just me playing around with rigs but I would really love some feedback.
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#3

Hey there! Great GFX.

I assume this is for a murder-type game, with the guns, so I suggest making this image more “dramatic”. When I first saw this picture, I thought it was meant to be calm (then I noticed the guns). To accomplish this effect, you can:

  • Zoom in towards to your subjects (the two people there), because right now the background is mostly white.
  • Turn the camera slightly (in terms of the X/Z direction) to make everything slightly diagonal.
  • Consider adding a background (maybe one of the maps from your game, if you are working on one).

Other than that, everything looks neat and polished!

#4

It really looks good, the textures as well,

but there are three important things you have to improve to make your GFX look realistic:

  1. Lightings

    • the lights in the backround are way too bright, lower it
    • the shadows next to the chair is “weird” or like confusing, by that I mean there are too many shadows and lights, try using 2 lights first
      *make it look grainy and dramatic (just as TheCarbyneUniverse said) e.g. the saturation and brightness has to be a bit low

  2. The Poses

    • make the legs look more realistic (for example: the lady in the background is sneaking or is running, or the lady in the foreground is bending down to get the gun)

  3. The Perspective

    • there’s so much space at the bottom and on the right side of the picture and is very blank, perhaps you should move the camera a bit to left and up unless you add some texts on it

Playing with rigs and Blender is fun and is the best way to improve your GFX if you do it at least 1-2 times a week. Maybe, you should try using Adobe Photoshop or GIMP (100% free application for people who love editing photos professionally) for adding filters, texts, etc. :wink:

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#5

That is amazing! I recommend more of a background and have an actual light cause, coming from the sun or a light which is in frame. Apart from that, it is amazing!

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#6

This is really a great GFX! Nothing really wrong! Lights, and limbs are done greatly!