Hello everyone, I am aiming to improve at GFX making I recently made this and want your opinion. Thank you for your time!
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Looks Great! The background seems off and the character is too close though. Nonetheless, good work.
Hey, I would recommend making the character sort of stand in front of the grey box, so that it can maintain it’s original color. Maybe even try a more dynamic pose? Otherwise good work!
Thank you, next time I will not make the character as big. Stay safe <3
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What do you mean?
Do you mean the overlay above the character should move back?
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Yes, so it’s like in front of the overlay. Right now it looks like it’s behind a tinted grey pane of glass 
Although, another off-putting thing is that the lighting on the character does not match the lighting in the background. In the background the sun is shining from the top left corner, whereas the character is being lit from the top right.
You can tell because of the shadow on the chest caused by the arm holding the cup of coffee. 
Ok I will update it with that version once I know its better.
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I would suggest bending the character’s arms and legs to make it look more natural, nobody stands with their arms straight out and rigid-looking. Also the lighting seems weird and offputting I’m not a gfx artist though so I don’t really know what I could recommend to improve it. Last negative is the lines around the character seem super jagged so you should probably fix that when cropping.
I hope this helped you improve in any way, have a good one! 
Good job! I would work on the posing of the character and the background.