GFX For a club first time using blender Text

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#1

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I have been doing this for only 2 Months. First time using text. Feedback would be nice :slight_smile:

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#2

Really cool for only doing it for two months :+1:

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#3

I like it! What rig are you using?

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#4

Looks good, but the background is plain, you should use an image of the cafe

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#5

The lighting is very bland, looks like you only have one light source.

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#6

The lighting is nice and uniform on the character, but doesn’t fit the vibe. It looks like you just took a spotlight and pointed it at the character, and it doesn’t match up with the emission lighting from the sign. It’s a decent start, but it’s just too plain, you need some actual builds in there and you should consider trying PBR textures.

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#7

So funny question I have used 2 rigs this my first render with the new rig it is SO much better I don’t know were the link is But If I see it I will message you.

#8

5/10
Why: Bad Lighting, Bad text font, plain background, bad pose.

Also, you seriously need to edit the image with overlays and glows and touch-ups and stuff.

#9

The valk? like bruh put 1 and 2 together LOL

#10

Oh, ok. I’m literally blind.

#11

haha its ok. I think we all are sometimes

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#12

please make something better I would love to see it lol

#13

It’s nice but maybe add some overlays and a different background! :))

#14

I like the shadows.

PS: Remember to watermark your art even if it’s just a draft, it takes 2 seconds

#15

Ok thanks for the advise haven’t been scamed yet but rather be safe than sorry

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#16

As Logimite already stated, I agree with this. Hope this feedback can help.