HI everybody! I have just finished a GFX for Park Story! I hope you guys like it! 
Hugh Thanks To @damyee for helping me with the fire
Give me your feedback on what you think about it! Thank you for reading! Have a great day!
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I really enjoy it but I think the monster need to be a little bit more lighter cause I can not see it clearly also I think you should make the campfire have a fire effect on it. Overall it is a amazing Gfx it just needs some minor lighting changes.
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A bit dark in my opinion. Other than that, incredible job!
Like @reekyboi1234 said, you should add a fire to the camp, this will make sure you have a source of light. Without it, you would have just a lightsource around and on top of them, this for me would be inportant to fix.
Still, good job on the GFX.
Not sure if it’s because of the camera angle (if purposeful please disregard), but the green person’s head, accessories, and hair seem to not be all rotated awkwardly. I can describe more in detail if you need.
I definitely agree that the lights could be a bit brighter and that the campfire section could use a fire.
Overall I think this was done very nicely!
it feels empty, like theres not really anything as like the main focus of the picture
Im sure the green hair dude is just looking to his friend on his left, or the monsters coming towards them in the distance.
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Yeah, but at least from what I could see the accessories aren’t rotated the same way the head is, or vice versa. I can see it though.
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There is a fire now (30 characters)
There is a fire now I just edited the topic!
There is a fire now! I got a friend to help me with it
This now looks Amazing. Continue the amazing work!!
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well now there is a fire look for yourself.
I just updated the topic! what do you think of it now?
Sweet now the fire is there with the effects around it, and the light source is now obvious now. Though now it is kinda hard to see the monsters, try moving them on the corner of the building peeking over them. This will be great since a dude is already pointing there.
Looking great! Could be slightly toned down but I think it fills up that empty space nicely.
Much nicer! I recommend showing the old version too, beside this one.
No problem at all brother, had a lot of fun editing this GFX!
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I think it looks fantastic! Like the majority of what people are saying on this post, I’d say to add a bit more lighting to get rid of that darkness, perhaps make the monster in the background stand out more, and make it to where the fireplace (stones) don’t look like they’re levitating. It’s just a few small details, but as I said before, this looks great! 
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