Hello! I worked on GFX for my group recently and since I dont make GFX very much I want feedback on it to see if i should do things differently with my renders. I feel like I did make the character in the render a bit too bright? Was trying to give it a pastel look but not sure if i even did that right.
I also attempted to retexture the bunny ears to white and give the googles green lens instead of a darker gold by editing the texture file from exporting from studio.
Also if i ever work on gfx’s more often should i consider opening commissions?
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I really like this, I just feel like It’s a little bit too bright and that the character feels too zoomed in.
Apart from that, very good GFX.
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As @owedkarma said, its rather bright. Might want to knock down the highlights. Also, if I’m looking at this right the other eye is hidden behind hair? Could probably have it showing half, that way it doesn’t appear like a one-eye user… plus it would insist that its hidden behind the hair. Other than that, I believe the design of it looks really well done, nice choice for an outfit. I think one other adjustment I would do are the goggles, something about seeing the one on the right is…odd because its sticking out more (but that’s just a suggestion).
As for your decision to open commissions, I would say be careful. Sometimes users may scam an artist by refusing to pay full amount till the work is done or until a transaction is made. Doesn’t happen often, but just something to be aware of. If you feel as if your work would bring great value to others sure! I think what really matters is the experience gained and using what you do to improve overtime, making some changes, and just having fun with it.
The avatar quality isn’t the best, it also is a little too bright. The background also doesn’t quite fit well or in other words blends too much with the character, try and make it more different to allow the avatar to pop out more. Also, you may want to be careful with the text, it may not be seen very well once uploaded to the group logo.
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Both, the background and the avatar render are slightly too bright, and the character feels too zoomed into the picture. Try playing with shadows aswell if you’d like. The color of Text doesn’t fit with the whole Logo.
Mentioning the Commission idea: When you have slightly improved, sure. As long as you’re not forcing yourself to do anything. Seeing great potential some time.
All parts of the image blend together. Try using different colours.
It needs some contrast. At a distance every part of the logo blends together especially in the ears, hair and clothes. Try adding outlines or darkening certain problem areas so the character and the letters stand out better
It’s cool, and I see where you were going with the pastel vibe, but it’s a little to bright for my eyes. Other than that, it’s pretty cool.
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