So my friend wanted me to make a GFX for his channel banner.
He likes developing too! So I made him this GFX:
What do you think, is there anything I can improve?!
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What you added looks good, the issue is if your friend wants this as a channel banner, I would recommend making it a bit more detailed, also try making the colours a bit brighter, and see how that will look like.
Best of luck!
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You could make it brighter
and tilt it so its straight
The Roblox studio logo doesn’t have the gap at the middle
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i tried to copy the logo with all i can do, whats wrong with it?
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You should get an image of the logo and paste it on there.
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hmmm, i will try that later, thanks
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For reference:
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okay, edited it, how is it looking now?
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It looks better! Make sure you work on the gap.
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The hand is cutting into the table.
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Make the background less plain too. One thing you might want to check out is my beginner’s guide to GFX.
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It will be really good if you make it brighter, and add more details. Also can we see the face of the player?
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Looks great but his hand is going in the desk. O_O
That’s so very cool dude! wow! I hope your friend is very happy that you made him that!
• The lighting is very bland. Use HDRI, emission planes, sky textures etc to mix up your lighting.
• The posing is stiff as heck. Bend the torso, move the head, make it look realistic. Nobody would be that stiff irl.
•The scene is alright but still quite bland imo. Why is the wall black?
Overall a 3.5/10. It’s a start but there’s a long way to go.
thanks, i didnt see that, i will fix that.
I it is really good I love the attention to detail on the books, but I would say to try and model the arms so they don’t clip through the torso, and raise the hand so that they don’t clip through the table, but it is really good!
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