Gfx i made recently. need feedback

Hey there, :wink: Recently i made a gfx,Please give some feedback and suggestions/tips.

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awesome work!
btw, they are playing laser tag ya?
if they’re not, i suggest you to not add the laser path, lasers or any kind of light cant be seen by the human eye through the air, you can just see the place its coming from and the result[like if its on your head you would see a dot on ur head]
i hope you get my message as i am not a native speaker

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Looks great!
I would suggest to add some texts and some details in the background.
At the moment, the background feels empty.

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Looks really good and nicely detailed I like the image you could add some text at the bottom of it saying what game it’s for but over all looks great well done :+1:

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Thank you for the feedback i appreciate that. the thing is for Green lasers in dark places like this one. they can cleary be seen. it depends on the Battery the laser has. Various laser diodes can emit visible lights,Like the gas,fiber,and the ruby laser emitting at 694.3 nm.But for the red laser you’re definitely right. :slight_smile:

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Thank you for the feedback i appreciate that.Ye you tottaly right for the Text hehe, the only problem is, i sadly made this GFX for no potential game. so i dont have any text to add in

Thank you for the feedback i appreciate that.Ye you tottaly right for the Text hehe, the only problem is, i made this GFX for no game. so i dont have any text to add in,and for the background. i wanted to let the background neutral,With only a reflection of the sun from ground. Thanks again :slightly_smiling_face: