I’ve been working on GFX for about a year now and i would like to post the evolution from the first GFX to the Latest GFX 
All critics and feedbacks are deeply appreciated !
1st work - 20th October 2019
210th work - 14th October 2020
Im gladly asking for some critics, i need to know what to change, thank you.
Sincerely, Cloudly
The lighting of the pumpkins looks excessive which would be great in another color and the lights emanating around the character would be better dispersed.
I have seen your recent work and you do it well
That’s some great progress! That’s a big leap from your first work.
I do have a few small problems with the newest work though. There is simply too much happening. There are the jack-o-lanterns that are emitting light, then there the spider in the back which also emits light, there are particles in front of the character who is also holding a Happy Haloween sign and the grass which is multicoloured. It’s a bit too much for the mind to handle at once.
I was really thinking about doing it more warm colored (the lights), but when i changed it it kind of didn’t stay with the theme, im gonna try to keep the bloomy lights more contrast and less powerful 
thank u so so much, i appreciate it
I totally get you, it was basically meant to be called ,trippy halloween, which indeed tells the whole story of why the gfx is so overfilled with colors and lights, compared to my other work this GFX is really crazy 
I adore your criticism so so much, thank you
I love the improvement a lot!
A few problems though, I would recommend to lessen the lights on the pumpkin, it’s a bit excessive.
Other than that, I really love it. Good Job!
okie okie
im gonna keep my mind on that next time i do something similiar.
thank you for your critics x 
