Looks great! Although the background is… a bit odd.
Yeah, I used an HDRI which added a weird background. I might add my changes and re-render everything without that background.
Rendering right now.
Changes I made:
- Made the eggs neon to make it feel more like a simulator environment.
- Added some more lighting.
- Fixed the background
They both look great! Although in the first one, I noticed a minor issue.
Try improving with the lightning and of course, fix the background.
Working on the background right now.
I like the fact how the GFX makes the viewer think like it’s a world that they can grasp. Wonderful job, by the way. The surface of the structures and terrain seem cartoony, which is a spectacular thing.
Thank you very much for your thoughts, if you were to be selling it, how much would you sell it for in robux?
Around R$2,500 - 4,000, I guess? I’m not good at making these kinds of estimates.
If you are going for the low-poly look, then you are on the right track.
– If you are going for the low-poly look then you should:
- Made both characters look at eachother (1st pic)
- Some more plants (not a lot)
– If you are going for the high-poly look, then you should:
- Add some more detail ( Garbage can on the side, More plants, etc)
- Add more effects or lighting
I wish you look for your future creations! G’day.
Looks far better now, good job.
I would try to add a few trees to keep the low poly flow good but keep it up it’s looking good!