Hello! My name is Kreeves and I am a 3D modeler that is trying to learn as best as I can with building meshes as well as building maps! I wanted to know how my first map looked to everyone else as there can’t be any bias towards it!
I personally believe this is pretty good for my first map but please let me know what you guys think!
cubicle buildings can use as much bend as the rest of the map
otherwise it looks good–wouldn’t look out of place in a lot of similar-looking games
you should move this topic to #help-and-feedback:creations-feedback Btw i love it keep up the good work!
It’s a decent start. Try learning blender so you can make your own models!
these are actually my own models! Haha thanks for the feedback though!
thanks for telling me about that!
Oh that’s my bad, I didn’t even see the description 
you’re completely fine haha thanks again for your feedback
I’ll give you a few suggestions, you could add some particles floating around the portals;
Instead of just having the path end at the eggs, just take another part and scale it nicely so the eggs are at least on something instead of on the grass;
Give some more variation to the map’s borders, I’ll give you an example of mine;
thanks so much for that! It really helps!
Can u make wider paths, it will look better
I don’t know if you have plans for the area below that crown but I would put the eggs there. They look out of place on the grass. You could also add different rotation to the portals so they fit in with the path better.
Nice job
For your first map, it looks amazing! The only things I would change are the size and the lighting;
Having a map that’s so big makes it difficult and tedious for players to navigate through the game, so I would advise making everything closer to each other and making the map smaller.
In terms of lighting, I think that for a simulator/cartoony map it shouldn’t have many shadows (if at all) and should be very well lit. In the first screenshot, there’s a massive shadow stretching from the “sell” building to the fountain. I would remove shadows entirely if I were you.
Overall a very nice map, especially considering it’s your first!
Awesome for your first map! All I would do is shift things around in the 4 sections so they don’t all look exactly the same. Lastly, just add a few more vibrant colors to make things pop, maybe a small lake in one of the sections. Great job!
This is a REALLY great first attempt! Kudos to you on that one - May I ask what you’re working towards?
