Give me feedback on this design please! (◕ ω ◕✿)

[MissFluffyHamster (Hamie)]

I decided to practice making denim SO YAY
Feedback please!

[Valkyrop (JustAGuy)]

Hello there!

I really do think it looks well done made and something that’d attact people to buy it.

Keep it up!

[0414_Sara (BunnySara)]

Looks cute! I’d give this at least 9/10 :>