Give me some feedback on a scene I made

Help and Feedback Creations Feedback
#1

Videos
https://gyazo.com/70cd32b57d67be99ee0be1b6e5559eda

1ff07878b23c1dfa1932733bbddb7821
1ff07878b23c1dfa1932733bbddb78211911×1049 353 KB
9ad737cb85016cbf9da85cdcae299a2c
9ad737cb85016cbf9da85cdcae299a2c1905×1051 321 KB
c40bfa5f6c9dff117177360cfeec411f
c40bfa5f6c9dff117177360cfeec411f666×832 69.3 KB

Give me your thoughts and feedback
Thank you

2 Likes