Give me some feedback

Yo

Alright so yesterday I just made this random showcase and I feel like adding more stuff to it and maybe improving some other stuff. I just don’t know what to do :sob: . Please give me some feed back

The main concept is that it is 100 years from today.

Oli :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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This seems like a very uh - depressing view of the future…

Not that it’s bad, just that there’s some small issues you might want to address.

  • For starters, there’s a bunch of old and falling apart stuff - rusting and terrible. But then there’s this one perfect sign that says “60” right in the middle of it, that kind of doesn’t make sense… don’t know if that sign means something, but if it doesn’t, I would maybe slant it, change up the way it look so that it has some cracks in it.

  • I would also change up the telephone poles, or electricity wires - I forget what they are called, to match the rest of the scene. They are also just perfectly intact… I would slant some of them, maybe make a few of them fall down.

  • Along with this, the “stands” in the back of the picture fit in, but they all kind of look the same, I would consider changing them up a bit, make some more rusted and broken down than others.

  • Lastly, this isn’t really a critical point, but just an idea - maybe add one or two old broken down things to be strewn across the road…?

This scene is a great start, you just gotta add some more into it.

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This is depressing as if we keep doing like we do now this is probably what it will be like.
I will do some of these things althoug some is not needed. ty

Just a question… is this supposed to have hints of futuristic technology, or is it supposed to be just plainly desolate? I could provide more tips based off of that.

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No it’s basically todays technology, the world has kinda been halted and just destroyed by nature.

alr then yeah, i would say that most of what i said before holds true still…

otherwise, in terms of terrain, it seems a bit boring in the background, try adding in some variations, flat spaces… dessert area is not so full of hills, try spacing out your indents a bit more.

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I really love the look and feel of this showcase. You can really feel the desertion and barrenness of the world you built. I would have to agree with some of @jvstaldjni’s points. If the area still receives human traffic, I could see things like telephone poles, road signs, and roads still being rather well maintained. However if the vibe you were going for is complete desertion of human life and its being overtaken and ‘destroyed by nature’ then I would definitely consider adding more decay to the structures. The terrain makes sense for a bare desert wasteland.

I really love the look and feel of this showcase, and I look forward to seeing more of what you make in the future!

8/10

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I recommend to put some cracks in the road caused from erosion since this is the future.

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The thing is that with the perspective of the camera cracks will wnot show good. I can add some but wont really add much to it.

Add some dead bushes and maybe more sand over the road. Looks great besides that, nice showcase!

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It looks amazing!

I think a lot has already been said but like @jvstaldjni said it might be cool to have a fallen power line/telephone pole or something. I don’t think they all would of survived after a 100 years.

Keep up the amazing work!

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Terrain looks superb and realistic. What I’d do is go on google to find concept arts of different assets to make.

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