Very cool game! Everything about it i cool, one thing I would add is a story to keep players intrested and have them have a goal, also make it easier for them to understand the game.
Thanks! 
I will keep that in mind.
Hereās a list of everything you can change, also the game is good but Iām better at providing constructive criticism rather than just telling you how good it is!
Criticism for the games page:
- Invest in a GFX designer, itās sorta hard to tell what your gameās about if you didnāt look at the description.
- Add the paragraph explaining the game to the top of the game description. This is so new players can easily find out what itās about and as a bonus it could get your game Featured as thatās one of the requirements.
Criticsm for the game:
- Decrease the blur more. DepthOfField too.
- The āTip: Click the TP button to teleportā doesnāt belong in the updates menu.
- Make the white background of the initial starting menu a light blue, not white. Then make all the text white.
- The apple freemodels you used are super high tris count, which means hundreds of them is laggy for low end computers, I suggest switching to a low poly model of it.
- Wave speed is still way too fast.
Thank you, I will do the following but I do have some parts I cannot do.
I cannot invest in a GFX designer because I do not have the money or robux to do so.
I donāt think the apple will cause lag as I got the mesh off a roblox tool in the catalog.
Thank you for your suggestions.
Edit: Also, what exact part of the description?
They wonāt for most computers but for low end computers and a ton of them in close proximity they will cause lag so if you ever get reports of framerate lag, you know what to do! 
What exact part of the description should I put on top?
Hereās the chart for your game description. The first paragraph should be whatever most summarizes your game.
Does the new description fit the guidelines?
Welcome To Camperuim!
Camperuim is a game where relaxing and having fun with other players is inevitable. Through camping, mining and exploration, you can buy food like sāmores from the Camp Mart to bond with new friends around the iconic fireplace or simply hang out at the cozy cabin!
(Many hidden wonders to be found!)
There are also many tools at your disposal for hunting. Some drops like meat can be eaten (cooked) while others can be sold at the Camp Mart for money.
However, beware! Sly foxes will steal items from you.In Camperuim, you are camping in a fun nature reserve featuring dozens of natural wildlife, beautiful greenery and endless possibilities.
Knowing this, Camperuim can be played as a roleplay game, an exciting adventure game or both depending on what you decide.
Camperuim was made in collaboration of ScottSpiritWalker (The creator of Growing Up) and G2_funny.
Suggestions are welcome! Follow to message me.
Have fun!
~G2 & Gymsie
Yeah it should! Itās a good description too.
Okay, thank you for bringing up the guidelines as I would have never saw them.
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