https://www.roblox.com/games/3349048109/Camping
Please give your opinion about my game. Positive or negative it just has to be constructive criticism.
I will make your suggestion italic when I add it in. Example: Suggestion
Suggestions So Far:
Improve bunkbed ladders
Increase size of fire sticks in campfire
Lower brightness
Lower depth of field
Camera water distortion sound
Reduce fire damage
Make nights brighter
Add toggle for walking camera movement
Fix Fishing Rod
Add Drowning counter
Add Introduction
Decrease DepthOfField and Blur
Add story or add a goal or something to allow players to understand the game
To be honest, the building of the game is extremely well made and so is the lighting. If you were to advertise this, I think people would assume it is a showcase, not an RPG or an adventure game.
Also, how did you make the shaking camera effect? I really like it.
If you want the script yet, I made one CameraShaking effect script. If you gonna use it, put it parented to StarterCharacterScripts.
local character = script.Parent
local humanoid = character:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
function updateBobbleEffect()
local currentTime = tick()
if humanoid.moveDirection.Magnitude > 0 then
local bobbleX = math.cos(currentTime * 10) * .50
local bobbleY = math.abs(math.sin(currentTime * 10)) * .50
local bobble = Vector3.new(bobbleX, bobbleY, 0)
humanoid.CameraOffset = humanoid.CameraOffset:lerp(bobble, .50)
else
humanoid.CameraOffset = humanoid.CameraOffset * .75
end
end
runService.RenderStepped:Connect(updateBobbleEffect)
I would say that the game is way too bright and the sticks in the firepits are too small for the size of the flame also the bunk beds latter is very simple and could be better. Otherwise Great Game!
I really liked the game! Nice terrain, all the maps in the TP button are nice, and I enjoy the music. The only suggestion I have is that some trees are a little blocky like the ones in the 1st map, but overall, great job!
Thanks! I will take your advice and try to make it more realistic and less bright. By the way, you can press the settings button to set my game slighting to default Roblox lighting.
I think it is an interesting game. For sure a lot of work went into it. I have 2 things to say about it though. First, when you walk it goes side to side and for some people it can become quite nauseating or just make your eyes hurt. Maybe making a toggle for something like that would be good. Second, it seems as the fishing hook is a little big or something to that realm because when you take it out, you either get ragdolled, can not move for a second, or just it acts buggy. Anyway, I am not here to criticize your game as it is fairly well designed and structured. Good luck and hope my suggestions will help you improve your game as a whole.
I appreciate your opinion about my game.