Hello!
Today I ran an ad for an new Piggy update in my game! Here is the ad:
Yes I did get permission from @MiniToon for the update
Game: Dune Buggy Driving - Roblox
Thoughts?
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This is just my personal opinion and criticisms about it, so take it with a grain of salt.
I personally think it looks bad, the lighting is just kind of dull, none of the fonts have any consistency or match, the colors are all over the place, I think if you really wanted to make it āPopā, learn to take full advantage of robloxās lighting system, it could really help your adverts look almost at the level of blender rendering, but thatās up to you, I also think that having minitoon on there is just a bit awkward, perhaps make him interact with the scene, pose him in the car, or on the car, or driving the car with super dynamic lighting, driving over a hill, I think itās a bit too static, and thatās also throwing it off, cause itās a game about dune buggys one of the coolest car types there are, but itās justā¦sitting there
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The car is a bit squashed (left-right) and the MiniToon picture is off to the side a bit. Itās a bit blurry too, but thatās not too bad.
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It isnāt good because the piggy car isnāt rendered so it looks weird and there is bad lighting around itā¦
so yeah!
maybe have minitoon driving the car B)
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In ads sometime the āweirdā looking ones get the highest click rate so have fun with your add.
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Your ad is okay, I would click it if I was bored.
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I invested 20 robux in it and got 16 clicks from 1614 impressions. Is that a good thing? Iām not rich so yeah.
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I recommend fixing the lighting, other than that it looks like something people would click on
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Itās pretty good, just needs some minor changes. When you see a typical ad, it should intrigue you and tell you what the ad is for. The structure of the ad isnāt very organized. The text font and color is slightly hard to see and not clear. The colours do not work well. And the visual part of the ad is clearly a snapshot taken. Overall, itās very basic and not interesting. Try making the text more readable (Changing the color, font, scale etc.) And I would suggest trying to render the image in blender or just Roblox studio is fine. Like a lot of people already said, adding lighting would be a huge improvement. Just add more detail to it basically! And try to make it simple, but still able to grab someoneās attention.
Hope this helps (:
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