Would love a review of my newest piece that I did for a commission.
Any positive comments or constructive feedback are welcome!
Link to DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/annualdeath/art/S-A-K-U-R-A-809773179
Thanks!
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It looks fantastic,very detailed and very realistic and the atmosphere is outstanding 
itâs amazing!
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The effects are too bright, itâs hard to see the NPC on the bridge. I also suggest giving it a pose.
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I agree, it was intended to be more of a background rather than a thumbnail so I suppose I could use less of the effects. The girl is looking off to the side with the wind blowing her hair was what I was going for, perhaps I should make it more visible. Thanks for the feedback!
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Is it just me or does the girl have no face? 
Great render, keep up the good work!
The NPC sort of blends in with the background. Maybe some small shading on the NPC would make it pop out a bit. Other than that, everything looks amazing! Especially the water which is truly breathtaking.
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@EpicCheatCodes @stevenchipeater I just felt that the face draws away detail from the surrounding so I decided to remove it, thanks for the feedback!
Thanks! I felt that if it popped out it affected the overall âflowâ over the piece but I did feel I lacked some detail on the character. Great advice!
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Itâs amazing! I love the bright pink colors and all the lighting in it! Great work!
Hmm, I like the idea, but I think it should be less bright and the character should âpopâ in the graphic. The Render is one of the most important parts of any graphic.
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Definitely. As I said before this was more of a background so I wasnât going out for the âpopping outâ, maybe I shouldâve specified that. This piece wasnât really render focused thatâs why the bright effect there, itâs just a lot of heavy editing really.
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P.S I love your watermark!
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Very pretty, the detail is outstanding - however, I would recommend adding more contrast of colour to the scene as itâs all a little too pink.
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Itâs a very nice piece, it gives me a very soothing vibe. Only critique is already mentioned, the effects make the lady a little indistinguishable properly. Really good job on this besides that!
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This is amazing! Maybe take composition and shadows into account though. Composition can definitely change perspective and mood of the drawing drastically and shadows, well the graphic looks almost too bright. Find a source of light and cast shadows where need be. Keep up the good work!
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I love everything but my only complain is that you canât really see the npc that well
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A little bright and the blurring effects might be a little overdone, also the character you canât really see. Nor does it have a pose. But I think it is good for a start!!
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It is indeed a little too bright, but your graphics look absolutely stunning.
There is a good amount of details.
I love how the river and the mossy rocks look extremely realistic.
Your desgin is incredibly eye-catching.
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The exposure is way too high and pains me to look at it.
The shadows are off, so I am assuming you edited in the character render into a photo. The bridge is transparent, the effects are overused.
The character render itself could use some higher samples,
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Yes I was just mainly relying on my editing skills for this one, thanks for the advice!